Demon God - Reviews

Hello guys, this is the author. Another shameless review, hahaha.

There really ain't much to say, but I'll tell you what to expect in the early stage of the story.

Right now, the released chapters (55 chapters) could be considered early stage because of its slow start. So, read if you vibing with that.

The mc, Desire, is a baby that grows old in time. He is weak, and naive. However, that will change as he grows older. By the way, on the early stage of the story, the MC is a fool/simp for monsters. (Yes, until now.)

And he hates humans. So, after meeting a character in the story, he tries to 'fix' that problem quite literally. The MC will go on an adventure where he would then meet many people.

The plot of the story...Now, that's for you to read.

I hope to see you guys in the latest chapter!

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Grammar is good
I just hate the MC he is childish (understandable since he is one) and he is very naive. also he just hates humans and loves monsters, i get the author said that it will be explained later but it seems like it is something that is relevant to early events in the book and needs to be explained early on.
Honestly i have a hard time sitting through the book.

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Stopped on chapter 15, this novel is extremely creative and is good at having you wonder about the world/mc, however, it is hard to immerse yourself in due to its serious need of an editor. If English isn’t your first language it might be your cup of tea.

Had to give world building a 3/5 as not really anything has been explained as of yet. Gave character building a 4/5 because the side characters are decently fleshed out thus far except for a few minor details. I believe with an editor both issues can be easily recitfied.

Great story so far, grammar here in there is wonky but nothing to wild. Very intersted to learn more about our OP MC and his Harem. This should blow Up anyday now keep it up Author[img=recommend]

Ive not read it yet this is just so hopefully it can get a star rating but it looks pretty good to me ive seen the first chapter and i like it no large grammer mistakes and sentences seem to flow good, So far like

4.7/5

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No words, my friend, no words. Hope ALL is famous just like you lol. But anyway noice one. This is a nice novel. All I can say is HOPE ALL.

this is really good. I stand by my ratings. Some that I have read written by people with English as their first language had worse grammar than this. I recommend you give it a read