Demon God - Reviews

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This story is building up nicely. The mystery about his live and the development of his character want me to read more about what he will become in the future

only a few chapters in and first thoughts on the story is that its confusing and weird. Constant switching between 1st and 3rd person every other sentence doesn't help either. Looking at the last upload makes the novel looked dropped so thats my main reason not going to continue. No point getting invested in a story for it to never continue.

I don't know about other people but I can't really sit through and read although the stuff might be explained later. I just can't bear the fact that "Desire" knows things that are not supposed to be known by infants. Maybe this is supposed to be some reincarnation type but I'm dropping here. Bye

It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained  often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks.
But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.

Good story author! Keep it up! I'm not going to be one of those readers that are just simping for the author in the reviews section, so I'mma tell you straight up. This book could be better. But hey! I'm liking this book a lot anyway, so do I care really? No, lol. An extra chapter a day wouldn't hurt though...

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It's Really lovely author am just addicted to the novel. It fit my bills ... I have more cions and power stones for you author ... Will be expecting the 6 chapters this ...week.... You're not half bad but you're awesome. So fluently written. Am amaze good job author