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All it took was 4 chapters to see that story is just hot garbage. The only good points is that they are translating the novel very well and the editing is pretty okay as well. Now to the bad, we're do I start. First the author summarizes before MC travels back in time in 4 sentences. 4 ****ty sentences. No background, no characterization. Multiple pov shifts that can confuse a reader. No background to base our understanding of the MC and side characters after time shift. A broken game system that randomizes a new players ability and forces them to stay with those stats even if they remake a new character. That's a broken system only someone who knows nothing about how games work and was to lazy to research for 5 minutes.If I could, I would message the author directly and tell him to burn this story from existence.
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very good all around.................................... ..................................................................................
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Well great start no weak to strong mc directly op mcGreat good vocublary now 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters ?????????????????????????????
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I didn't like the MC's development and the general direction the story was going was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo disappointing
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five stars. this novel basically does everything right and the writing and grammar are also really goodi just hope it won't be like other novels where they take a break and never returnall in all i would recommend this novel, just read the first few chaps and you'll be hooked trust me
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Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.
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So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.
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Shameless! yuri? vampires? blood? way to use said blood? oh yes and so much more! come join Kiada on her journey to find her lost girls in another reborn series!this book is part of the reborn collection Harem RebornHyde, Worldwalker Reborn
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I absolutely love this novel. It is probably my favorite Webnovel I have ever read, and I have read a TON of books like these, but never found something that fits my taste as much as this one. And no, I am not lying or whatever, I have been searching for a good novel for about half a year now, and oh my, thank you for making this book. All I would like to say, is I hope their will not be any romance, and definitely no harem. I would stop reading this and will definitely be very upset, like really. I will definitely continue to try and stay as the top contributor for now, and will try my best to spend all my coins and will try to gift the author my power stones. So please, author, if you are reading this it would mean everything to me if you were to put your best effort into this, for me and the others reading this book. We truly appreciate all the little things you add to this to make our experiences better. And of course, I will say it again, I would love no romance, but if you really want to, like really, really badly, then make it actually proper, and don’t let it effect the story too much. Anyways, I will really try my best to support the author ( ・∇・)
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Nauty_ManuGreat Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Tsukimichi fanfic idea immediately after Tensura reborn as a true dragon Tsukimichi harem fanfiction This Story is about a 19 years old boy who had read Tsukimichi manga and watched the anime but one day he died on impact in a car accident so he was sent to the world of Tsukimichi.Race in Tsukimichi: Human Magic: Lightning Dragon SlayerModes: Lightning Fire Dragon Slayer, Shadow Lightning Dragon Slayer (Unlocks Further Down the line in the Story). Eventually Unlocks all elemental dragon slayer magic.Traits: Alpha Male, Strategic, Smart, Calm in Complex Situations, Cold to anyone who threatens his Loved Ones, Loving to his Women, Can make his women into dragon hybrids with his blood Harem Irina BelserionFem Acnologia Fem IgniaFem DogramagSelene (Fairy Tail)Minerva Orland Fem Invel Yura Lilith (Dmc) Yasaka Celestina ( looks: Jennifer Lopez Ogre by zerofourteen on deviantart)Galatina ( looks: Bimbo Ogre by zerofourteen on deviantart)Sala (Penelope Cruz Ogre by zerofourteen on deviantart)Frederica Baumann ToaLouisaIrina Ranina ElaineEstelleRonaLisa Rembrandt Sif RembrandtLily Front GritoniaEva AenslandLuria AenslandSairitz Kahara Abelia Hopeleys
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"No. You saw how she fought with that Monster. You said that you didn't teach her any spells but she used intermediate tire magic, although it was weaker then normal, since she didn't have proper control over it. She is an intelligent, little girl. I don't see any reasons not to teach her now."
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The Author has a very interesting way of telling a story. A very entertaining way. It's rather quirky and fun to read whilst being unique. The world that has been created is very interesting!!! There is also a lot of mystery. I can't wait to find out more about this world and what is happened to Malazan and what he's up to.

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