Crystaline Origins - Reviews

The only complaint I have is that the writing is sometimes confusing but it seems to be getting better. Other than that i see no major issues to be unhappy about. The idea of a roman reincarnation is awesome as well.

Highly recommended novel & guys please leave comment on every chapter to show your support for this novel???????????????????????????????????????????

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Woah. The sypnosis is short but too strong. The author can easily captured the reader's hearts by just reading the sypnosis. The first chapter is well written. I love how the author wrote the storyline. Keep it up!

Overall, the story is fantastic. However, some areas could be improved in terms of grammar. That aside, this story is rather engaging and well written.

Be it warm or cold, what I experience is wisdom.

With the chance provided vampires showed excellent command ship. They were able to reap a lot of lives really quickly but elf's were not bad as well. Looking at the chaos, elf's commanded for all mages to start bombarding the vampire's front line to which vampires gave a firm reply with there own mages. Elf's knew this would happen and thats what they needed because a fight between mages pushed both sides back and this let the elf's get there front defense together again.

In which case, she could relate to why Ichigo had attacked so ruthlessly.

Everyone:..!!

"Cousin, please go ahead. "

"What are you doing? Who throws his elder brother like this! Where are your manners!... Oi?