Crystaline Origins - Reviews

I had one goal in my mind; Do everything  I can to pass and remove the so called Uniform cause at the long run, it became annoying.

so I suggest hmm let's say ten trainers who will have 15 groups of 10 slaves split evenly between them to see what methods they employ and we do this in say five to ten years then they have a fifteen year trial period."

"If you say so..." Gohan knew there was something more to this and that Issei wasn't telling the complete truth. He had seen many peoples faces when they lied or just tried to brush off a similar question and judging the way Issei replied something was plaguing the boy,hmm wonder what's up with him…Soon enough everyone had finished their breakfasts and were ready to leave for school.

need improvement on writing to avoid double wordings, but still enjoyable to read

dude it was nice ???.so pls upload more chapters

Wow, I’m really enjoying this story so far! The chemistry between the characters is amazing and so confusing, and I’m really curious to see where this goes next. I love how the plot is unfolding, and it’s clear that there’s a lot more to explore, especially with the LGBTQ+ themes. The way Alex and Clara's relationship is developing has me hooked, and I can’t wait to see what kind of LGBTQ+ activities and dynamics will come up. It’s nice to see the characters growing and becoming more open with each other. I have a feeling things are going to get even more intense and emotional from here, and I’m excited for every chapter! Keep up the great work, doodlejinxx. You’ve got a really engaging story here, and I’m wishing you all the best as you continue to share it with the world!