Breakthrough; A Tragic Love Story - Reviews

Have to ask a question to fellow readers. You big giant ass one eyed wolf with fur black as night. What you name him? Our girl look at him I know what your name boy fluffy. Yes she name one eyed demon wolf fluffy

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Alright first off, that title is horribly translated. Second off, wasn’t the pregnancy stare in Strongest System? Correct me if I’m wrong. Third off, I know for a fact that the prenancy stare was in Keyboard. Feel like this is gonna be low quality fan fic

The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .

I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this

this novel is the best author i really like this and it has all the elements I like (eg:World travelling, cultivation, harem ,system etc) idk why it is underrated but I just want to say that to the author Thank you for this wonderful novel and please don't drop me this ??

Its a copy of my vampire system, literally only changing a few things to fit the name of the novel and changing character names, Quite honestly its quite disgusting. Theres nothing unique about it, his power levels stay identical, people stay the same, same starting position, all in all its just a cheap rip off

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Autor here: To all experienced readers, please be gentle.I hope you will enjoy the story, regardless of my writing.For now, I've released 10 chapters, while having another few as backup, but before I work on them, I would like to know your thoughts. Unfortunately, editing all of my mistakes and polishing takes me several times longer than writing. So releases might be slow, especially because I have a full-time job other than writing. But the end of whining, have fun!

The novel is worth my time. Truly enjoyed the work. The plotline is humorously designed pertaining to schemes, adventure, cool dynamics, actions and mysteries. The concept is exciting and gives you wonderful experience! The characters are descriptively tailored with unique traits carrying individual importance. The dialogues are humorously incorporated and further adds in flavour to the plotline. The world building is well progressing as well. Nice work author! ?

*God wakes up, after noticing a little bit of pressure on his stomach

   "Finally a bright light flashed again and this time something or someone came down with it. It was a beautiful woman" said Asuka " The woman had long,  brown, straight hair. She was wearing and Long flowy dress"