Breakthrough; A Tragic Love Story - Reviews

"Classified by your organisation, sounds interesting" James said.

Xīn Lèi was like a lightning that run and punch the weird looking cat kid's right shoulder it was having a light shocking effect that directly made the kid flew 1 meter before falling. Then Lei approach the folding fan kid and kick his butt, it was all done in a few blinks.

The three were now in seated after getting on to the train, with Natsu next to windows, and Mira and Erza across from him.

This is what he liked about their world despite being full of suffering and death. The people he lived with were bound together by love.

Jamal looked across the distance.  "Looks like he found a compound bow.  Uh, guys, no telling how good a shot he is.  Get around to the back of the platform.  Getting stabbed by an arrow would really suck.

Diana: *IM SO STUPID..of course his taken!*

Shameless review from the author here. I really hope you guys enjoy reading and I feel I've got a pretty good story to tell so i hope you guys stay in tune for what's to come.

I was recommended this by a good friend of mine so far one chapter in I can’t wait to see how this story will story progress , Xerxes is such  a great character and I can’t wait to see the mystery of the fallen kingdom unfold.❤️❤️❤️

What's up guys, this is my first attempt in writing a web novel. I'm open to any feedback so that I can improve my story as it progresses.hope you guys enjoy Ryo's journey.