Black Pain - Reviews

started out very nice and interesting then there was some blatant slowing mc progression, moments that made me cringe when reading or dubious whether it is me or this book that has logic issues. overall interesting story with annoying bits and thickly written plot.

This is a very well written novel so far. The characters have flesh, mc is not op, and there is romance and harem (and hopefully no ntr). Mc is growing steadily and the cheat is not ridiculous like various other reincarnation novels. If at all, it is an existence like Eggy/Jasmine from MGA/ATG but not the same. Plot has not started yet so nothing to say about that. Updates are fast.Rated 5 stars at chapter 25.

I go 6 chapters and I already saw too many cliches, the protagonist from chapter 1 thinks he is special because he is a transmigrant and he thinks that he can only have strange things and the others do not. The idea of merging with pets as armor seemed interesting to me but the protagonist is so boring and the story has so many cliches that I prefer to abandon it and wait for someone who creates a better version, because these stories always come out 1 or 2.

great story.  well written. MC is good.  side character's are likable. Though it starts off as a common trop, plot flows nicely and evolves in to its own story.  very few grammar mistakes.  waiting for more. ????

Ahh, I'm a bit happier now. Time to go home.

'FUCK!'

Will sighed as he fought with his choice of running with his own team or joining Spike. Truthfully he had no options at all so he came to accept his fate. Will looked to Spike one more time as he felt a stir in the energy keeping them there. "Alright, I'll join you. But on the condition you save my friends too." Will told him as he wanted to make sure his team was fine as well. "I can't promise anything for sure, But I will do what I can." Spike told him as he thought for a moment before giving him another piece of advice "Something tells me you will fight many people on the way to me, so just be careful when you leave. That's my last piece of advice to you Will." Spike told him in a cautionary manner before he looked to the ceiling then back to Will giving him a wave with a last "See you soon." as the dream came to an end.

(@Heirs Academy)

Hana:not bad, the Reo is asking me a favour, ya iam ready to help you, ya tell me what help do u need from me.

"Careful, we don't want to prolong the injury list." Karl took the plate and returned it to the shelves. He crossed his arms while tapping his arms.

"Since you already have close combat and movement skill cover, until the rest finish their training, I want you to focus on creating a range spirit skill. I believe you can do it yourself so I will go check on the other. Ask me any question if you need help." Yu Xiaogang said as he left Rai to work on his spirit skill.

"And fear it," Xavier whispered.