Black Pain - Reviews

Friday's voice came through his earpiece, "Boss…estimated casualties are reaching into the thousands. Every known Ultron Sentry has detonated. The cities of London, Hong Kong, New York, Washington D.C., and Paris all report several dozen explosions within key areas of the city. Sokovia is reporting at least a hundred explosions. Seoul, however, appears to have taken the heaviest hit."

2. Chapters are published during birthdays.

"Playing? What kind of game?" Light asked with a little shock.

"As you wish Master," said Jester while giving potion.

"It is you ...," Writerz answered with his innocent face.

character designs a bit to realistic it's not for me but it's a good read

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                                                 

Great novel but I hop you focus more on the character surrounding i dont know where he is or what kind of building in his sight the novel just throws dialogue  like virtual novel game or something similar you don’t feel the characters movement or connection to the world around them Very annoyin + it’s too fast i don’t know his mother name nor i see his home or family

nice story...waiting for chapter 20...love the character...

Plz give me more !!!!! this is great work

Author nailed at the atmosphere.System hasn't been explained yet.I felt natural part of process, adventure.From the fifth chapter onwards the novels tools off l.Expecting high tension chapters with system.