Beyond The Golden Boundaries - Reviews

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Constructive Criticism; Make the Prologue an Auxiliary chapter, and, if you are not going to have any other chapters that'll throw off the numbering of the chapters, remove the numbering.Well written by my standpoint, but definitely an erotica (of the few I've skimmed, one of the better). However, I don't much like erotica, so sorry, removed from my library.Keep up the good work, and try to update at-least once every other week lest you loose those who'd enjoy this story.;,;.

I didn't have much expectations based on the theme, but it really proved me wrong. It was amazing and both character and story development is going at exactly correct pace. love it...

semma feel full storyevery character write as strongwritting is strong thanks for the bookI love yamini characterbut climax is very emotional one

As usual, I read to chapter 10 to get a feel of the fic before writing a review.Author is at least honest about where this story is heading with the chapter 1 face slapping, I appreciate that, that's why I continued instead of dropping it immediately. Typical mary sue character in a typical trashy xianxia plot; a typical author's self indulgent fic. I also didn't know otakus are so OP irl. Can talk smoothly to girls/people, "manly aura

[There are thing ranging from technologies, item, powers, and animals!]

Now following the direct route of the cylinder mist admitted from Matt, the feeling cool water washes over me. Going through the wall, I am met with an ominous hall way. Glancing from left to right, both ways appear to be the same. The only difference being one has the pale orange mist flowing in a straight/curvy line down it -which is slowly fading-.

"Now then, everyone's favourite part—the starter set: the system and two blessings." Lin Xu took a moment to eat the slice of cake the Goddess gave him.

When Karen finished playing her final song, she bowed and said thank you.

We then all go towards where the five tailed hell beings presence is and see that it now has nine tails and is bigger.

Wait for the next chapter???

"Then let's get to it. All that's left is to take this city!"