Beyond The Golden Boundaries - Reviews

"Punya majikan. Saya tiap hari setoran."

Element: doesn't have a element and so it's a thing called "No-Element" and "No-Element" are where it has a power but nothing like fire or wind or something like that.

Peak philosphy?? ye oil up the mc! Make em feel the grind and the pain, make it a fight through diamonds???u200d?? ye but reading it maybe fix the way you describe things, its kinda confusing and you reiterate the same idea too much, the first chap is barely recognizable from how long the paragraphs are, maybe add some plot points but if its just an auxiliarry chap it could work, but now since uts the first chap nothing is actually happening