Becoming An Evil Magical Girl - Reviews

Awesome work author,  keep it up

Honestly the best sports book I have read in a while. And this comes from a person who doesn't like Webnovels of this genre that much. But the author's words seems to have a magical effect. You would feel as if you are self inserting into the characters. Each one is a human, an allegory of what we could and couldn't become, what one wishes to do in life and what one wants to achieve. In all honesty sport lovers should give this one a try, for I haven't seen any competitive web novel that stays truthful to the realism this much. Truly a great work.

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This seriously needs more chapters. The foreshadowing and little by little world building are amazing.                                                        

I have yet to read the story when I have begun reading  I will delete the review and write another one. A piece of advice the chapters are in the form of a huge paragraph. U can split the paragraph into smaller paragraphs and leave spaces between them so that it will be clearer, easier to correct mistakes, easier to read, and more appealing to read.

the raw title please.very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good good. please want more more more more more.☺

I love this it's a really good read no complaints with the story here it has a great story and pretty good characters the MC isn't this experienced battle hardened chunky always looking for a fight to power up so he does make mistakes is a lil selfish and I don't mind I'm just concerned if there is going to be new chapter updates or this book will be sadly forgotten never finished

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It's an amazing novel. liklike ir so much

A little cliche, but your writing style makes the story unique. The only challenge is the frequent changes in scenes and locations, which can be hard to follow sometimes. Adding a little bit of description whenever necessary would help. Otherwise, a potential story with good characters, especially Sebastian- I love his madness!?

invisible dragon:if i use this then the opponent has no choice but to self destruct!

Everyone looked at her in awe.