BACK OF MY HAND-Paige Bueckers - Reviews

This feels like a meh version of “I get stronger the more I eat”. Definitely not as gruesome as IGSTMIE, but also not as intriguing. It lacks the pull. It seems very cookie cutter without anything to spice it up.

this is great and I love it, I hope author doesn't run out of ideas and add unnecessary stuff like a harem or romance, or maybe make modifs to to the system(this one might be necessary depending)

author i think you should check the chapter after writing .there are full of mistakes we don't even know what is happening in the story because of the mistakes.i think you should check before updating the chapters.author you want to give your attention more for correcting the mistakes rather than the updating of the chapter  .any one can tell me where I can read the novel without mistakes and the raw name of the novel .

bad writing waste of timethe story has so much bs mc provoked enemy blabbering,repeatmc does nothing waste of chapterdon't read this u will get brain damage

Pretty good so far. I have read it all yet but it definitely grabbing my attention. The overall for it is better then some others that I have read. Keep at it.

Eh... I just voted in the wrong place (your old link) :(The cover page is absolutely stunning!  The story is great, The plot is interesting and your characters are expressive. You're doing well!I wish you endless inspiration and a lot of good ideas!

The story is well developed and arouse one interest. it is very stimulating. I think the introduction should have been too snappy to keep the narrative flowing because some people or a person like me could eadily be discouraged if the information in the introduction part is not well articulated .

Hey, It would mean so much if you could read my short story and give it quick review and let me know what you think. :)I an aspiring writer/author and would really appreciate some feedback, so i could possibly write more stories or novels.

"You truly are prideful I look forward to our fight! HAHAHAHA." I hear coming from behind me as a peal of maniacal laughter rings through the dark streets.

I looked in the mirror in living room with disgust. My makeup was ruined, if any kid were to walk by they would have mistakined me for Pennywise even, my hair messed up from its elegant shigon. My light grey dress that was off the shoulder and went down to the floor with grace was disheveled.

The reason why there's infinite stages in the primordial god star 10th realm is because its the last realm like lets say 2 people fighting are from the primordial god star 10th realm there's no further realm so the winner will most likely be the one with the higher stage the stages go on forever so the primordial god star can hold unlimited power, and through the stages the life expectancy in mortal star 1st realm is 100 years 2nd realm is 200 years every realm you get to you get 100 years added on the life expectancy and for the primordial god star 10th realm is 11,000 years total but thats not all every 10 stages you go through from the primordial god star 10th realm you can live 1000 years longer instead of 100 years so technically speaking you could live forever if you keep going through stages well thats all i can put for cultivation stages i will try to get chapters out as fast as i can they will probably be 1000 words each chapter