Avatar Online - Reviews

I think this is the best novel I have written so far and I'm inviting everyone to read it. You will not regret and I promise you will get hooked right from the start <3

I'm a simple guy; I see Piokilek as the author's name, I read it. But I don't think I will like any novel more than SC. That was the first novel I read on this site and what motivated me to write too.

One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!

I'm only slightly biased because I'm a fan of the author, but I like the novel so far

Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part.
Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too!
Definitely worth a read so far!

I love it!!! I wish i could time travel to the future just to read the complete novel without waiting.
Keep it up with this one pls author-san!!!

If Sprit cultivation was a B grage, then Against Heaven's Will was a A+ and this right here Avtar Online is a masterpiece with a rank of S.
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I just binge read the first four chapters without realising. First, the author. I've read/an reading all of his books and one thing I know is that the newer his book the better his writing, story building and character development are. That rule doesn't change here. Characters already have their distinctive personalities. The mc is a cold blooded, definitely not the type to spoil his woman to death. In other words, he's not a simp.

Seems like a good start. It got me hooked already. I am a fan of the author so I may be a tad biased. I hope you stick with this story and that there will be steady updates.

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This story is amazing so far but new chapters come out too slow to keep the interest of some of those who get to the newest chapters and are waiting for new ones to come out. While I understand that is important to take your time writing to make sure that new chapters are of good quality, the fast release of new chapters is also really important even if you have to shorten the chapter to achieve this. More but smaller chapters of the same quality will help you keep the attention of those readers that are less patient or invested in the story because they will notice a notification for a new chapter more often and keep it at the top of their library each time they open it to read the new chapter. It may also help you Increase your writing quality because you will be focusing on a smaller amount of work at a time.

Wow, all reviews are 5 stars. Hard to believe it so I'll gonna add this story to my library for now then wait for the chapters to grow into hundreds then read. I really hate when I'm have been left hanging when I'm already so into the story just because there are only few chapters. :D