Avatar Online - Reviews

Great new work, different and new that just got me hooked on 12 chapters. Got to see what happens next in the future and definitly waiting for next chapters daily like other books you have.

Can't wait to read more of the book it is very interesting and it has me very anxious to read more and thanks for the chapters so far.

Honestly you can kinda take this review with a grain of salt because there are so few chapters I cant say anything about stability of updates or world background really, but honestly i'm hooked. The writing quality is really good and so far the characters, irl world, game, and npcs and everything are rly good and well written. The author has also dropped foreshadowing and honestly my imagination is running wild and I can't wait to read more. With only 9 chapters I can't guarantee the novel is good but so far its promising and its 100% worth it to at least try reading it.

i usually wait till a series is in full swing before reading as it takes more than a few chapters to cause me to continue reading. this was not the case as I was fully engrossed in the story by the end of chapter 2. would wholeheartedly recommend reading

its only been 4 chapters but I'm so hooked in the novel right now. maybe author san is one of my fav.
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Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.

I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.

The author has dropped the novel for more than 8 months and it seems he/she has done it before as well. I would have loved to read more on this however we dont have anything in the updates if there's going to be more.

The novel is very interesting but the break just happened to be at a very juicy part, just broke my heart when the next button just faded.

This is a harém? 130 chap and he Just have 1 girlfriend

THE ELEMENT OF SURPRISE

Chapter 49: I don't know if this is a mistake or not, but. the guard keeps saying that a certain person has the potential to master the 5 elements since there is only 4, which is the fifth element then?

earth fire water wood gold