A Hero's Growth - Reviews

Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support

everyone  trial read this now and get it through.....or I'm going to be unhappy ,..............................................................................just kidding  pls give it a shot

The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.

I was very excited about this novel but in the end it turned out that the title and the story are fake as the novel is bad and just an old harem to satisfy the desires of the author

If you have a system you are not an extra .. . .. .. ..    .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. ..   . .. .. .mmvvm.m.k...   .. .. .. ..

I agree with what some of the other readers have said.  Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members.  Some of that gets resolved in later chapters.  One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc.  I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.

Absolutely love it, have yet to find any problems with it. .............................................................................................................

It is shame that this seems to be tropped. You were even invited as possible winner for competition. I read from the comments that there had been some problems with writer´s life. I don´t know what kind of problems. At least I hope you are still alive. As for the story. Naturally I like it very much. UIt is nice fresh air to have dark natured healer. Well, Alex is closer to neutral evil. I think he was just normal human when he came back. At least he is sane. To those how haven´t read the series. I will highly recomment to read. Even thought series is tropped. It is rare to find tropped series be so worth reading.

Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?Nice keep going ?

The writing is good, grammar is to the point and story progress fascinatingly. The mystery element around which the story revolves is to the point, and it will make you seek the answers more and more with each passing chapter.

"Either way, there are 100 points per Guild, so most likely we will be facing a hundred members per Guild, having one point each. Compared to us, since we are inferior in number, even if everyone was distributed a point, some will have to carry more than one point, and if that individual was defeated, then it will surly cost us a lot" Pearl said, frowning at the fact that every solution they came up with; one by one it was knocked down like it was nothing.