very very slow development of the story and always writing unnecessary and very unimportant things for the story itself ............................. ................,....,............
Love it. pace is the only red light indicator. this novel is ambitious project, and i hope the author has the stamina to do it justice in reaching a satisfying conclusion .
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I enjoyed it well, the idea of having Alexander in your fictional world is quite interesting and fun. I somehow started it with a serious face and ended up laughing , and wanting to read more. Overall a very nice story. keep it up.
???: "B-b-beautiful goddess?! *Cough* My name's Lois Lane, but you can just call me Lois" (I changed her personality a bit, shyer at the start but she will become her normal stuff once she warms up to good o'l Damien.)