Unfortunately Misfortuned - Reviews

read 41 chapters at a time (the chapters are not large) interesting, even though the hero is dumb for his age............................................

I love the beginning of this novel; how the writer immediately pulls us into the story's world. The narration and descriptions are great and the character development is simply amazing.

Fantastic story so far. Is the story dropped or on break??????????

Yet another brain dead author tries their hand at writing for sweet China Points.Will there ever be a good trial read? Will Chinese authors ever stop being racist? Tune in next time to find out on 'Never Gonna Happen'!

Feels like the writer was going through something while writing this. Most plot points don’t make sense and there is a lack of explanation. The poor grammar and mixing up of names does not help either. I’ve decided to drop at chapter 14 after checking the reviews on the story (wish I had done that earlier). Final thoughts: The story is quite intriguing so far but the grammar and number of mistakes is just way too unbearable. Don’t recommend to others

Amazing Novel. There is so much potential in this and I just really hope that you do not drop this novel because these type of novels often do get dropped in the early stages. Honestly though, if you change the book cover to something more mainstream and do around 3 of your current length chapters per week, then you will definitely get more readers and recognition because your writing quality and storyline is top notch. ?

Okay, so what I love about this novel is it's funny, The characters are amazing love the plot, the story development, Keep it up Author love your work!!

I love the story so far and I'm all cought up, but i need more

The story is really great. It actually take the basics of fantasy novel but I like it how u manage to do something good with it.It's a little bit slow at the beginning but it slowly and surely go to the right direction.I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Great novel, and easy to read. My only gripe is the inconsistency of new chapters (But I recognize that the author has a life outside of giving me my fix of new chapters).

Nice one Great ❤️. Great job Monsieur ?

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