Unfortunately Misfortuned - Reviews

He came directly to me. His blue shirt shining in the rays of sunlight that seemed whiter than earth. Yes, people dressed here the same. They found jumpsuits uncomfortable, and probably because of private business. He smelled like aster today. It was a pleasant smell.

Ria: The only giant thing here is your mouth now stop complaining and get back to work.

insists, slowly guiding us to a modest house bordering the open sea. In two days time, we sail for Kyparissia. We can speak with the captain about you accompanying us."

"Honey, what are we seeing?" asked Leonore.

And all that glitters is gold

Manik didn't thought about anyone or anything else but just .........

Even though I've only read a few chapters, I can't wait for more. I thought I should wait a while before leaving a review, but nah, I can't help it. Good job to the author! Cliche trope but the writing keeps the plot interesting. Waiting to see how everything would unfold!

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??

Okay this is my review!World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established.Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes.Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, NarrationWeakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis