Umbrum - Reviews

this just copywriting from chinese novel, search 斗鱼之死亡判官 and you will find it, original chinese novel and FREE, if you not mind read it on MTL or Google translate.

Basically a half assed copy of famous novels and manga. School Days, King's Avatar, etc. The MC is a rich "sensible" girl whose only fault is laziness. Yes she was born with a silver spoon that she never forgets to use, no real hardship. It's fine if you never read the originals it references from otherwise it just seems like a lackluster copy. Good for wasting time not good for much else.

Zero to hero? More like zero to infinite propaganda. Every character started to say 'outside nine provinces everyone is barbarian', like dude calm down why do you hate other countries so much and you're writing something like that in a book? If this book was written in another country I'm pretty sure that author would be banned for racism and xenophobia. Probably someone tried to machine translate and edit it with notepad's 'find and replace' but forgot to replace some words so every now and then realms and everything starts to become confusing. MC's character is really awful as well, literally beats 7 year old little girl and amputees her so he can test his abilities on her. If you're into dark/evil mc then it's alright but then he starts saving random people.

The MC is such a pushover with women. He let's them take advantage of him and can't ever go against them...also, as I'm reading more and more of these genre novels, I'm realizing that all you need is a pretty face with a chilly personality in order to use the MC. Is that the ideal type of girl that Chinese guys want?

The very first thing that I noticed when I started to read this were the many grammatical errors. Normally if it's just a few, I wouldn't mind. However, there are enough errors that I had a hard time staying focused on the story itself. The grammar could use quite a bit of improvement. With that said... I do like the Author's creativity with the story. It's definitely something I'm not used to reading, but I would still encourage new readers to give the story a shot.

i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped.

Nice story. I like it's development very much.The MC is also smart and intelligent. The background is also nice.What I like the most is the story's plot.Keep it up

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Looking forward to more. This seems like quite the beginning and I wonder where you are going with this. Sia and master sid are the main characters? Is he a janitor too? Why are the dates so different? If she traveled and hasn’t met Sid yet why does the synopsis say she learned from him?  I hope the next couple chapters reveal the answers to those.

"Oh, do not be so concerned. You should have realized it by now: it is like a blot, a stain. It is ... diluted in your Blood, in your body. And while it is only in small amounts, it hardly troubles you. In fact, it only triggers your Bloodline to work a little harder. And that is beneficial to you, no? But be careful, the Taint grows if you persist, and soon, you will no longer be able to contain it, or deny it. Most seek help before that happens."

a  Elderly man in black suit comes out , who who was in his Midage.

He walks the distance with a plague of unclear thoughts. He only recalls bits and pieces of his past yet he can't remember much except for one thought...Strength.