UNDYING FLAME - Reviews

I wish you could do more than one chapter a day

Honestly I was reall liking the book for the first 12 chapters but after that the story became really rushed and opened up a lot of plot holes in the story. It is really sad to see that happen to a novel that intrigued me.

I hope the mc can be faithful(not a fan of harem)?Other than that, this is really super well created story?with combinations of system , transmigration, weak to strong, well rounded mc

I personally like monster evolution stories and this looks like a book people who read fantasy will enjoy. Overall a good book with average writing quality, consistent updates and an mc who has an actual personality and does not just go around mindlessly becoming stronger.

Very confusing, and hard to follow. I tried very hard to enjoy what I was reading but...there's too much not explained or brushed over to really feel the story

this is honestly one of the greatest Lord novels out there great word building and action too

It's against our laws for one not of Alpha blood to change a human. Look at it like this. Subordinate blood has been mixed, diluted, and passed through hundreds of blended up types of gene pools. Alpha blood remains pure, which is why the Alpha Position is passed down from Parent to Child. The position can't be won. It's a birth right.

"Seamen! Get this ship ready for departure. As soon as backup arrives, we'll depart for the nearest Island and fan out from there."

"Rhoan, Darkline has eaten well today. Don't over feed him tonight, I don't want him getting fat" Avery ordered.

"I don't care how you guys can get this far, but the battle against Tiger Raiders was just a small amount of troubles awaiting you on the road to Eastern Continent. Savage hunters, powerful and dangerous beasts, bandits, and warring nations. Those are what you're going to deal later."

He lowered his head so his face is at level with Atlantis' face. "What did I tell you I would do if I hear you say "Sir" again?

Suddenly Zephyrus felt a small desolated feeling, like a very cold breeze, and he stood up and warily looked around. Finding nothing out of the ordinary he sat again in the small corner he claimed as his, despite the baby-like appearance his eyes scanned everyone he saw as if judging whether to trust them or not.