UNDYING FLAME - Reviews

The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling. In fact, it was rather immersive— that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption! Some people might think, I don’t like info dumb, and straight up quit from reading… Well, don’t quit just yet! The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)

This story hits harder than Semibreve missiles truly one of the greatest novel that I has read  -member of the merchan guild

Pretty good.                           

this is so intriguing  definitely adding to my library

After reading 50 chapters I can confidently say that this is in the top 0.001% Of web novels, I am genuinely shocked that this isn’t in the rankings, all the main characters until now have great character writing- the world building is the weakest part of the novel though I’m sure the author will expand more on this aspect. I can’t believe how much of a hidden gem this is and if this is truly authors first Webnovel then I’m shocked at how great of a storyteller he is. I believe this has potential to be one of the greats, I am a bit worried that there wouldn’t be an overarching plot for the novel, I can’t imagine how difficult it would be to come up with a satisfying ending for the novel though I have faith in you Mszrswrite. Also, I wouldn’t have imagined that you aren’t a native English speaker if I haven’t seen one of your comments on the chapter, you’re actually doing such an amazing job on this.Lastly, you really should put a paywall at a specific chapter. You deserve payment for your work, I would imagine locking at *SPOILER* Lucius’s death would be a good place though I’m not an author so take it with a grain of salt.Author is cooking us a 5 star meal

The story is really interesting. Please continue to update.