Tree of Aeons (an Isekai Story) - Reviews

The phone i use to write this is busted and bearly works but i dont rember my credentials to trasfer my account over to a new phone so whem this phone works ill post and in the mean time ill keep trying to get my acount transfer

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The writing quality is not bad. I loved the prologue and the intro. It was intense and heart-wrenching. But you should write "I am" instead of just writing "am..."The characters were interesting too. You did made effort to introduce each character individually, giving them more depth. I liked the flashbacks of some characters which showed their depressing past, as it made them more 'real'.You are doing great, and I'm sure you can improve even further! ?

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When an unemployed person occupies a rare card that most pro players are looking for, this really caught my attention. Since I have read just a few chapters, I found it interesting since the prologue. This novel is what I am looking for, hope it will be fun til the end!

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Anyway, I'm currently walking down the streets of Sulren, looking around scared in case someone spots me. You see... I have a rare gift caused by a scientific experiment gone wrong: I can bring dead people back to life! But there's a downside - to bring someone back, you have to sacrifice someone else's life, be it your own or any stranger's.

Catching up to Vermouth, he jumps her from behind, but she sidesteps him, preventing him from using his brainwashing power on her.

  Seperti machiya milik Akira, begitu banyak pengunjung yang datang membuatnya kerepotan. Syukurnya Sehun berkenan membantunya. Mengantarkan pengunjung kekamar yang telah mereka pesan. Membuatkan mereka teh hijau. Ada juga beberapa makanan ringan lainnya, seperti mochi (Kue dari tepung beras yang ditumbuk), ginkgo (Ginkgo biloba, biji pohon yang direbus dan dimakan seperti kacang), dan juga yakitori (Sate ala jepang). Keahlian memasak Akira merupakan salah satu alasan banyaknya pengunjung yang datang ke machiyanya. Sambil terus memasak, ditemani Sehun, akhirnya mereka bisa mengatasinya.

To claim his bountiful inheritance, Lu Cian must prove his loyalty to his father, by proving his loyalty to his wife. But Lu Cian doesn't have a wife.

"Keep rowing," I softly ordered.

Happy: Hell I'm going with you even if I'm kicked out of the Central Alliance. You and me under the Cherezvelle banner dude!