The Tale Of The Worst Squad At Rodeo Academy! - Reviews

new, fresh, exciting and jaw dropping. twists and turns that will have your mind blown from start to finish. can't wait for book 2!

What a crappy translation! the translator should either take a basic grammer/writing class or just pass the translation off to a competent translator like the 25th_chestnut.

It's a really good read, plenty of action in the first few pages! My only criticism is the fact that there is barely any info on how he died or what his life was before, hopefully it will be sooner than later.

I really have to say this novel hooked me in. I can’t wait to see the new updates

RI is Er Gen's most serious novel; no real slap stick characters. PoT is overall just tragic. Main character just can't seem to get a a break. The transition to The Devil is the expected outcome after a series of unexpected events. Read it

First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way

? WARNING: There is too much propaganda against neighboring Asian countries in here. To Japanese and Korean readers, you've been warned.?For translation quality, it's good, albeit there are critical typos that should be fixed asap?I have no comment for the updates because it's on trial state yet I'll just give it an average score.?Story development is predictable and there's too much cliche. You can find all the selling points of some old novels placed in here. That sounds good right? But in reality, it makes it mediocre. While reading this novel, you will always have this feeling like: "Hey, I've read this before!"?Character design is old?World Background is just so-so. It's not vague but if you think about it, you would knit your brows.I can recommend this to new readers but not the others who are accustomed to reading Chinese Wuxia or xianxia.

Спасибо за отличную историю. Очень приятный текст, к сожалению Английский язык не знаю, но воспользовавшись Google translate получил весьма хороший текст. Замечательные персонажи и хороший юмор делают это произведение превосходным. Очень сожалею что последняя глава вышла аж 3 года назад, что значит что продолжение врятле будет, жаль(

Dramatically there sometimes when the wruter refers males as she and females as he but that is very minor. Apart from that this is amazing. when i started reading it I thought it will be like any normal Overpowered MC all cliches but this story has strong plot armour,character development and great ideas. Being a system type novel the whole concept is different. Probably comes in my top 3 of the novels I have read on this platform. I love your work man keep at it, because I know it is hard to keep an Overpowered Mc with a system as interesting as you did. Amazing I used all my power stones on you man, keep at it.

Plenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios. Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far.The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes.I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.

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You should put a meme and parodies tags here!!!!??? Anyway.. The idea is pretty good, but, this chapter seems rushed. There are also things that can be fix about the way you narrates this story. I recommend to use third person Point of View when you write more chapters. Well, I can't say much because you only have one chapter for now. I will review again when you have more chapters!! Don't give up!! ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ