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love the book it is just sad tjat I can't read past page 40

Im caught up with Translations. I really want to like this, I really do. But to soon to judge this story. My first impression of MC is - incompetent and slow-dim witted, perhaps even naive. He behaves like a Newbie Gamer all the way through. Nothing goes as planned. The NPCs know more about the Mechanics then he does - even though he read the guidebook as well. I understand the Author trying to make him seem like a normal person who was dragged into this but he’s a man, get a grip lol. It’s quite worrying if this gets in politics, I can see him easily getting caught up in unnecessary things.There is still hope for this novel. If MC group gets overly powerful quickly, so the drama is nothing. Also if MC establishes his npcs as his wives soon. That’d save this novel. (Because obviously they’re going to be courted after) I really like these first 4-5 girls. They each have their own personality. I’m glad MC not a pervert but it wouldn’t hurt to be more dominating.

Its amazing. The novel is fresh and new. Concept is very good.Overall I say its a hit. Hope so it comes out very soon. I am excited to read other chapters.

There are a few small mistakes in writing which can be a slight turn off, but not enough to ruin this amazing book. The author actually out a lot of thought into the background of his story and has his characters thought out. I haven't seen much character development yet. But the story is still new and I can't wait to see what happens.

Thank you for checking out my novel. I will be updating this novel daily.The plot of the story is based on virtual reality, and the experiences the main character, Vicky has in and out of the game.Each character has a complex personality, that I hope you guys will love throughout the story.Please feel free to leave comments and reviews about the novel. I hope you guys enjoy ^-^

She heard her voice being spoken by the demon, "A royal blooded? It's you! You trapped the king and us! "

"Mr. Baldy what about Olly and the others? Did they already leave?" Nate asked as they had been apart for half a year. Olly and others were taken to another branch for training and Nate stayed with Baldy to train in the assassination.

But death is unfair. It gives an end to anyone it chooses. No one knows who's next. There are people who still wants to live. People who wanted to beat their disease and live a more fulfilling life. People who wanted to go back to their families and see their smile once more. People whose heart that wanted to beat for the person they love.

"Wait a minute," I said realizing where I heard that voice from, "you're the voice from the orb that went into my body."

Rolling his neck, he started to work, preparing food and whatnot and, eventually, he lost track of time.

Those bikers are dumb enough to think that shooting at a judge might make him think twice about a guilty verdict. The police will think it's the LowBoys,the Judge might think it's us.Either way he loses sleep gets nervous. After that we head out to Brookwood. Take care of some business. Then off to the land of beers and sweet cheeks. That's our alibi. We were there all night."