The Hero - Reviews

Grabbing Grey and pulling herself closer to him Crystal  smiles "I said YES!"

Staring at the ancient but lovesome facade of the temple, an Aztec design made of yellow sandstone, and the wall stone were grown some vines and algae like the sun whispered behind the green grass. There is a large sandstone sign carved the name of the temple and it was written in many language I know:

Zhao Yu slowly took the box with shaking hands as he lifted the lid to see the blue red game helmetbye felt a nostalgic feeling, this was the game helmet he used close to 4 years. Although this was the cheapest helmet with a synchronization of 92 percent he still felt hugely grateful.

And all that glitters is gold

"Um, how do I say this?" Crap, why did say that! Shit now what?! Ahh! think think think!.

i read the first five chapters and is pretty much interesting, its the typa stories I enjoy; vyle creatures, a system and dark fantasy. And have a tag of romance which i like pretty much, I just hope it will be good writen