The Forgotten Princess - Reviews

Hey the story didn't get dropped did it?? How come there aren't any chapters after 300?? I know sometimes there are slow downs when publishing chapters but its only day six of the month and I paid for top tier privilege so I kind of expect steady releases.

BS this didn't make it. Pissing me off, male section needs to have option to pick as much as female section...what the hell. Sexism!         

Honestly, the first 5 chapters had some mistakes but I persevere a little bit too since I'm interested in the plot. It was pretty obvious the author was a newbie in writing and always asked for help and advice. But as I read further, I can see his improvements. His writing style becomes more amazing and I got hooked on the story before I knew it. Continue the good author!!!

Veer smiled and said "Yes. You got it." And then he looked toward Priya and said "And you my wife! Now we are ready to clear your doubt. In a mortal world, blessings or curses apply to those who have a mortal body and it works on the body and then soul through it. A soul cannot be blessed or cursed because it has no mortal identity."

BOOOOOM!

"If you feel like talking about it, you're allowed to speak. If not, I'll let you be. But don't hold it back, Jack. There are times that one must learn how to move on if they're able to educate from their pasts."

Still waiting

The bullet hit the barrels igniting the gunpowder within making them explode tearing the ship apart while sending some parts of the ship fliying sky high enveloping the ship is a fire created by the explosion and smoke lifting up smoke as it did dwarfing his rifle smoke into a harmless child before itself

All Michael could do was hug his stomach as he tried to catch his breath. After a while of struggling, he managed to raise himself off the floor by leaning on the wall. While leaning, he managed to walk through many empty streets.

The Pirate System.

Not that anyone else in the club room noticed. They all were pushing themselves back against the walls. Issei and Saji though, both had blood coming from their noses. Personally, Harry hadn't thought that it was possible to get a bloody nose from arousal before. OR maybe they were just afraid of the show of power? The rest of the devils were all shivering with wide eyes.

"Don't think anything else , we just talked , okay" Nat answered