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The Forgotten Princess
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Alexander flew for a while to a meadow where I take out a small white control "although I remember Bulma pressed the first button in the series and the ship exploded into a thousand pieces
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Hope you update soon
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Only shooting stars break the mold
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Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
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So much to do, so much to see
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Only shooting stars
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Hah, the homework is finally finish. Now, just wait for the bell.
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Nice start n different from the cliche one's. Don't drop it pls
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I tried but I couldn't go over the 11th chapter, it has the feeling of either a voice writer  someone whose first language is not English, someone trying to write too many words everyday, or some mix of the previous.There's multiple Grammar errors in every chapter, the writing style is seems geared towards teens, with a very strange flow most of the time. it may be MTL.iIhave given three stars to story development because I haven't read enough to evaluate that dimension, but the characters design reminds me of those old Asian movies that every character is some kind of extreme, very obvious and clean cut archetype.It's not like the novel is sooo bad, I've found worse here, but i find it lackluster and not worth my time

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