The Foretold: Sun Child - Reviews

Mass Release today 5-7 Chapters will be posted. stay tuned...️

So it's a story of particle physicist - a person who study interaction of particles, look like a scientist to me, wonders whether this will a cultivation story where a person uses scientific knowledge to solve his problems, since it's about particle it may be about Qi or its composition or whatever it is, though I think I will give this story a try since it is given in notes that the MC will a cunning person and I'm really looking forward.... **: Rating will change depending on the novel...

this comes from author of legendary mechanic what more do you expect a well written story it's great the projection worlds are not just simple simulation but actual worlds this story gonna be lit hope the webnovel picks it up

The description of the novel is more like a future event.Character is the usual beta MC with not so well family. No 'friends' but somehow he hangs out with the popular ones.He doesn't understand why people behave the way they behave. It's like everyone owes him something and he expects too much from friends he barely met a week ago but is kinda indebted to them, maybe because they are the first friends he ever had._So far, there's no direct description of the VR-world._ Story development is simply amazing. And because of MCs character, the story always gets me on edge as if something is about to happen. Got me completely hooked up.Didn't like the part where MC is in a scheme before the story even developed, the story hasn't directly given a hint but I can tell. Strong SAO vibes but I'm sure there's something different and author has plans for it.Well thought background of MCs friends.     No grammatical errors and I realised that I didn't once binge read and read word to word._Updates are fast.   _Take away my powerstones.

Wow, there's a lot to process from the first chapter. It's action packed and filled with comedy. Screaming for his mummy, really? The author has a great sense of humor, I'll give him that.The transitioning was smooth. I easily understood the way the game gave Leona rewards for various successful attacks on the succubus queen with thick makeup.My only critique was the way the author used the third pov when trying to introduce us to the "Hendra" character. Isiriana was described perfectly and so was Leona. Towards the end, the narration of Leona beating Isiriana was great and all but earlier in the fight when Hendra was struck by her nightmare powers, it wasn't explained properly.I had a hard time understanding what exactly was going on.Overall, great execution of the world background.Keep it up, author.

A little rough regarding the translation, but man, is it good! I really want to see this continue, the MC is different from common, despite being the classic OP.

Pretty go I recommend pretty good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

The world is built from the get go, sending us straight into the action. The unique characters and strange habitat pulling us along. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

Croix is faced off against an unknown Devil team but just by looking at her standing there they already feel restless. And when she is in the midst of casting her spell they hurriedly admit defeat because just from the holy aura she's releasing alone they can tell that it would wipe them all out if it were to hit them.

Unable to let out a grunt from the pain, the man winced from the strike he just endured.

intelligence:10

"Wait, what the f*ck? How persistent is that one guy that accidentally dropped in with a full squad?"