The Foretold: Sun Child - Reviews

But Dan straight away dumped this technique into recycle bin in his brain as he was not some freak.

I argued.

*Common*

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Imagine spawning only to be eaten by a monster seconds later. It's not very fun when it happens in a shooter game, but it would be even worse if you lost your gear and levels upon death like in my game. That would be truly frustrating. Because of this I made the first area comically easy. The average player should be able to stroll straight through and reach the first town with ease.

The storyline is good. It's the type of book I'd read but author consider editing more before posting

Hey there, I absolutely love the unique concept behind this insane story. It's really, really interesting and I hope to read more of it going forward!!

I didn't read this but it looks like something i would read so yeah. I want a fp ?

I'm loving this story , can't wait for more chapters.

Why is a system needed in this novel ?????