The City of God (FR) - Reviews

This was good until the author made the Mc a 'hero' and changed a 90yr old into a completely different person I have no idea why make him live a second life when his previous life has no effect on his new life. what a waste of good material I love Dexter so I got very nostalgic reading about the mc, turns out he literally became a 'Korean villain' that has the alignment of chaotic good. every Korean villain story 'template' is how the mc personality is in his second life.also, this has poison (romance, good-natured Korean citizen, helping the people)

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

I'm still waiting for additional chapters of this nice book, which has a fascinating and original plot. Keep up the excellent work! will advocate for readers

                                                                                                                                                    K

Everything is superb about it... the characters are very likable which is something I like a lot from a book. and the plot is interesting...

Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!

"Daddaaa....."

"Hold it right there heretic. What the hell you think this is? Get your ass over here!"

sky: I can if I dont want to see the step monster

His pride was practically eating him up alive, his fingers digging into the pits of the metal container. Helix had only one thing on his mind, food. His hands now covered in dirt and rotten fruits that reeked a heavy smell, his fingernails picking up every little bits and pieces along the way. He groaned loudly in dissatisfaction, nose cringing at the smell as he had gotten closer to the bottom.

It was a depressing thought though, so I should probably cheer myself up. Maybe I could dream about what I wanted Vuong to do with me when we were completely alone in a sound-proof room? His laptop was a real trove of treasure, who knew he was that kinky? He was good in hiding his porn stash – a five-level folder structure, with two as decoys, hidden view setting and a few other tricks. Well, I was better at digging in his computer, and he took my birthday as his password. To be fair, he was a hormonal teenager… and the last time I checked, I was the same. Well, it would just make our romantic life much more interesting, but it would be way longer than in the future.

Primero lo sostengo en el aire y aplico otra fuerza de repulsion sobre ella.