I really want to like it. It has the necessary ingredients, but it falls flat because the chef doesn't know what to do with them.There are so many words in every chapter, but nothing of importance is being said.I read 16 chapters and I've found myself skimming through most of it, as it was mostly pointless nonsense.And when there's suddenly something interesting going on, the POV suddenly switches to some random dude and his sister, or some random dudes drinking and talking about something. Don't know what, I just skipped past the whole thing.I don't think I'll continue reading past the first 20 chapters, unfortunately. It's all a convoluted mess and nothing makes sense. Driving the reader mad with gibberish is a great way for your readers to immerse themselves in your novel, but it's not for me.