That turtle, the strongest on earth - Reviews

J.D. gripped Payton's suit jacket and pulled her closer. "I'm sure we'll come up with something."

Chris " it's 12 in the midnight and I sure as hell know that nobody would come for me or anyone at this hour alena"

    "HAH! Jokes on you! We already asked our parents for permission to stay over here for the night!"

Up there I could almost touch the always present clouds above, permanently darkening the earth enough that I could go out by day and yet grow some plants.

Towards Fan Tian Yi, he did not have any good feelings for him as he was the extreme!

-...except that you made a God realm cultivator kiss your shoes...

"Great, we should keep moving"

There are constant time skips. The system only exists when the author remembers this is a system novel. The author conjoined two premises, he is trying to write an actual, serious cultication story but decided to give the protagonist cheats. It clashes. Why do the cheats even exist? Now for my personal input, I don't like it after he joins the sect/family. It's pointless. Could have been a cool rogue, solo cultivator story. Now it's turning into a cookie cutter cultivation story. I would have given it a 2 but I will give it a 3 because I can see how others might like it.

Author here! I hope you all are enjoying the story. You all can freely ask or comment, I will hear of you.

Great so far hoping the author doesn't drop it