Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that too everyone Story Development: 4/5Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good. Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.Character Design: 4/5I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him. World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.