Revelation - Reviews

i was expecting something good from reading the comment but from the very first chapter we came to know that mc is conceited,arrogant, selfish and who doesn't now the way of the world he expects the things to go his way and he does'nt appreciate his girlfriend even though se had been doing so much from him ........................this is my review based on the first and second chapter.....and dont expect that anything that synopsis  portrayed...in it mc is shown as a guy who is devastated by what happened to his family and knows the hardship of the real society but he is jst arrogant , selfish and conceited character.

A complete Disappointment .The only decent chapter of the entire story up to the latest update is the 1st chapter (or is it ?) Repetitive grinding , bad humor, lacking in creativity and on top of that in the later chapters you will get to know that the author is most probably a racist too . Honestly I don't think this story should be translated in QI .

You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer.  A novel with great potential

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5 chapters in! Time for a review!This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever!I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers.btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! ???

Most elementalists would only be able to unclog 4 of their meridians, which i was the minimum requirement for reaching Core Guiding Pinnacle. Every meridian you could unclog would boost your strength further, however it wasn't easy. It could take years to unclog even a single one, so most would only unclog the 4 main meridians which most Arts used.

Rei got done with eating the corpses witch was surprisingly difficult as he felt disgusted to have to eat the pirates so now what is left is to cover up his tracks

Payton slid her arms around his neck. "As long as we actually make it into the water this time."

    Godanya dengan cengiran menggelikan diwajahnya. Hajoon melirik kearahnya sejenak. Memperlihatkan ekpresi tak tertarik di wajahnya lalu lanjut bekerja.

             While Nightfall was thinkin, the wolf appeared. It let out a howl which decreased attributes of every enemy, in a 50 meters radius by 5%. The howl was so loud that everyone in the beginner village could hear it. When other wolves heard it, they started sprinting towards the Wolf king, when the indigenous residents heard this howl, they all scurried and hide in their houses, when the players in different part of the forest heard this howl, they rushed over to where the sound was coming from, when Daniel heard this howl he stood on the same spot with his fingers on his chin.

As I was roaming around, trying to find something living or at least something similar, I got a glimpse of something shiny at the edge of a clearing not far ahead. So far, I was feeling like an amateur scout, who had no idea how to even make fire.

After tumbling over her thoughts she decided to take the freshest one.