Re: Dragon ball [Cultivation] - Reviews

this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................

The title... it just speaks to me.                                                                                                         

Story's really good ,dropped it because of Ranzy character ...might pick up later

There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there.Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself.I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time.*For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog.There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you.Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use.This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.

I hope the english translation is good to easily understand the story. There are grammatical errors and the way to correct the grammar is that we have to rewrite the sentence or the while paragraph.

Well, he didn't care. Some people survived in this world by learning not to poke their heads in where they shouldn't.

I was frozen in place and had no clue what to do, but then in the blink of an eye i had a sharp pain on my side. He had kicked me . I screamed, so loud that people started pouring out of the theater rooms. Soon enough I saw his face. Andrius was there. He had ran over and punched him in the face. From what I saw the man was on the floor knocked out with blood coming from his lip.

Magnler went back to his bed and went through his uniform. He took his scavenged pistol and belted it.

dont like sabrina as wife of mc( to girly)

O nome deste senhor irado era: Francis Santos sua esposa se chamava: Maria Santos e sua filha era Flávia.

Rex moved at the swift speed smashing the cat on the ground and moved for the bison. They were strong. Along with their horns, their legs were burning too. But that fire had little to no effect on Rex. He kicks broke the legs of the bison rendering them useless. With his speed, the dogs were the ones who could match him but he had his way too.

I've read so many novels that even I forgot the count but this one...... I'm hooked and literally can't describe it but this one is really really nice.