My Mafia Mate - Reviews

i need more chapters ?

I love this story!! When is the next update?? I already finished reading everything ... please update soon

Love this book, it's so interesting. Highly recommend!!!

I love this book so far. I would love to know when more chapters will be added.

Intriguing story line

Great story, I was really impressed until... the sudden change from chapter 100 to no updates to suddenly we're at chapter 250... and it's at their wedding reception it seems... did I miss something ...

So. . .  is the MC Sephiroth?

Rebirth of the Strongest Empress

the crossovers between twatf and orv are the best.

Author likes to take massive random breaks.
Like he'll write a few chapters then just disappear again for a while (A couple months)

Can someone explain to me how is this mumbojumbo about parallel universes supposed to work? Like in Edward original universe there are Harry Potter and then in another parallel Universe there are 'another' Harry Potter that exist,so which one is which? Are these 2 Harry Potter is the same person but in different universe or completely differrent person with the same characterristic,name,etc etc?
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The same situation with our Mc which is Edward,what about other "Edward's" in another Parallel Universes?? Are they the same as our Mc or is that its our Mc Edward is somehow Unique? But what about other "Edward's" when they have exactly the same body,face,talent and everything else that our Mc have?
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Did i get anything wrong?or am i just too stupid to not understand this concept about Parallel Universes with peoples having many identical copy of themself. Please Help Me !!

I think I will pass oreading this book. Just the blurb that I read to tell me about it...was FULL of grammatical and spelling errors. that tells me no matter how interesting the book might be - reading it with constant errors will drive me crazy!
AUTHORS: HAVE YOUR BOOKS PROOF READ!! ITS RIDICULOUS