La Renaissance du Dieu Immortel Sans Nom - Reviews

I like the writing style, it's good and it has relatively good grammar and punctuation. the problem is you're trying to mix a character who is overpowered and a character who has no power and acting like they would make the same decision and mistakes. But what really gave me a problem was how complicated you made it so early on. It felt like you were trying to make the book one of those really big worlds that are really complicated without putting in the effort to write hundreds or even a thousand chapters. I think this story has great potential, but you need to think about your spacing and the type of character you want.

Really interesting concept. One of the best novels of this batch, and it is similar to the AFK concept. It's kinda like a combination of a death game and AFK simulator, and it's done really well. It's one of the only novels that makes me feel like it's special. It's not one of the best written novels, nor does it have the best characters, but it's truly unique. I hope you can give it a try.

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Yes I am reviewing my own story.I began to write this series because I was interested in series like Konosuba. I asked myself "What would YOU want out of an isekai series?" and so I decided to write my own.This story is designed to poke fun at the general idea of isekai wish fulfillment series while also being its own story. I don't want to sound egotistical, but from what others have told me the writing is funny and consistently well done, the characters are memorable and enjoyable, and the world is well built. I don't ask that you make this your favorite story, but I do recommend that you at least give this a try.

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Everything was as usual except her heart, she asked Ying Jun that she would visit garden in the evening and she should accompany her too.

*Doesn't get old no matter how many times I see it.*

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Shin was wearing a light blue plaid skirt and a deep blue checked collar shirt, she had pretty much dark make up but looked pretty with white stilettos.

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