Ideas for Writers - Reviews

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.Premise was fine then ,2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

i will try this i dont know how he  is nuclear it would change his dna and not good dna he would have cancer and it would eat and replace his cells

Literally worse English I ever read. Use your brain cells and write understandibly can't understand anything written.,...???.?..............

the mc is Lazy ........................................   ............   ..................... ........ ............................   .

its a really interesting story. which brings forth almost all cliche chinese novel protagonists . you can read the mtl from other sites it has 700+ chap.

Keep up the good work .........................................................................................................................................

Haven't started yet but I sure will ; I just hope it'll be as intriguing as it sounds. This is the first Horror Story I actually find myself liking...

Mediocre setting. Mediocre generic characters you see in every weekly new release. Mediocre plot that isn't all too interesting. Waste your time with this if you actually have nothing of substance to read. Otherwise don't give it the time of day.

I went and I'm not,

Lyra, dumbstruck as she recalled the memory last night, blindly grasped Dumbledore's hand as he turned in the spot. Lyra felt an uncomfortable sensation like hooking her clothes, before she had time to register that, she was in front of a shabby pub with words Leaky Cauldron on it.People bustled around, going to the bookshop around the corner, stopping in front of a Chinese restaurant

As he had for the last few months, Connor shaped the charcoal and ashes into a pile that would burn slow and steady until dawn had arrived. Rain would simply harden the ash and wind would pass over the embers. Connor would sharpen the fire-hardened sticks into miniature spears and sell them for half an iron coin each. The first twenty sticks would buy Connor's singular meal of the day, eaten with the smith and his family. Eight more sticks would let Connor wash with soaps.

"… Aymia, if I told you that I'll go to the capital, what would you say?"