Fatal System - Reviews

good pace and good plot so far,

Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.

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To be honest I'm almost to chapter 200 and it's become dull. There's no storyline development, so far the whole thing reads like a combat log with some occasional talking. The MC only develops as a fighter and not a person, and I understand this is a combat story but why introduce other characters and have them travel and fight together if he was just gonna be alone. I've grown so tired of the fights that I just skip them.

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Everything you ever wanted to read is here: Evil Demon Lord Main Character that is controlling everything behind the scenes...What more could you ask for if you’re into that kind of stuff?

I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel, Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).BYE

Mirkos uses a somber tone, "Master Wiseman and Sai, I sense it too. Many were murdered and it was by the Yagers!"

Now there were only three people left in the main hall.

Then she thought of the event when a mysterious interface lit up before her eyes and helped her pacify the virus. Eva then automatically recalled the word ' Alterea ' and a interface lit up before her.

ai tsunoru yasashii sekai

"Who ever is out there? Show your face. Else it's not gonna turn out good for you!