Fallen From Sky to Be a Mere Adventurer - Reviews

Not horrible, but also not amazing.Sentence structure is a bit jarring to read, and the statement pacing is strange. My main issue is the lack of knowledge as to how Esports works, though. It's very clear to me that the knowledge on the operation of an esports team and the players practicing habits, plus the coach, that the writer does not have any experience in the esports scene. The display of a very rudimentary and romanticized version of esports is very prevalent in this novel, and detracts greatly from the experience.

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just a shameless author giving 5 stars here

The writing quality and development could be inproved updates need inprovment on background aswell as character design not bad cherten parts of the chapter could be vastlyinproved

I see the potential. I will continue to vote daily and gift if it goes well. Looking for more explanation on the powers and other things.

'Unsatisfied? No! I'm absolutely satisfied!' Alexander was so excited that he even ignored the provocation.

This sounds like it will be a good story

"Hmm, tell us what you want?" Krillin asked curiously.

Don't forget to Point the out the grammar problems and Thank you again for reading.

Pria yang asal Manado ini sambil kebingungan melihat kiri dan kanan, setelah mendengar kedua rekannya tadi masing-masing menyebut barang panas. Tanpa berpikir banyak pria Manado tadi sambil jabat tangan mengucapkan "Air Mandidi."

"I'll not presume you'll need me all the time, that we are something more, or something less. Take your time, you need it!" A mischievous smile again... "Oh, it's not the first time anyway! And I know that deep down, or should I say, deep inside, you women are all the same, Freudian phallic symbols and all!"

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play