Peltivierre makes the daring choice to kick of this series with action at the start instead of a more subtle character introduction scene. Since there are so many elements to introduce in the beginning, showing the story by narrating how the MC became a hunter may have been a more effective way to gather the interest of the readers. Unfortunately even after starting the series, the chapters only consist of non-stop action from chapter to chapter instead of focusing anything on character-building, world-building, or story development.There are a number of grammatical errors where past and present tense are mixed up, which is quite jarring. There are also some instances of throwing in future tense as well.One way to improve this series would be to incorporate more imagery, describing the various sensations the MC is feeling. It would also help to describe his emotions and feelings in detail, so readers could connect to him more.Since the MC spends a lot of time, more detail could go into describing survival in the wilderness. Thus far, it’s heavily glossed over.Although this series starts up decently, it quickly comes to show it has nothing but action to substantiate it. I don't know how it changes later on, but it lacks a lot of substance.
