Some parts of the story, are a bit lacking, but overall it was fun reading it! I see the potential of the few chapters but some parts need a lot of explaining, Like what are the Virals? Can they be scanned too?I like the dynamic with the main character and the potential partner(?) both of them are so ignorant of each others feelings that its creating even more misunderstanding.Came from reddit, you got something on your hand man or woman, I made this account for just this review. I might comeback when there’s 30+ chapters or more.
