制霸好莱坞 - Reviews

aiiiiiii, we got an another one!!!.............................................................................................................................................................

this is so irritating with what he writes about

why is this out of trial reads? fdsfdfddfdfddhsfdgfdgfgafdgfdgfdgfdgfdsgfdgfdgfdgdfgfdgfdgfdgfgfgfdgfdgfdgfgfdggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

Nice story and worlds building, although sometimes some actions might be contradictory to the character description of being cautious, but hey they still somehow fit good into the story and make it better

It's pretty well written. But there are some things im not comfortable with. The inner monologue, for example, is written in pretense tense and can sometimes be distracting since there are no italics. Other than that it's pretty well written.

Rank 2 Sovereign (stats average 80,000)

''3% porcento é uma quantia boa você pode se ascensionar a um espirito mestre que tal? ,É uma boa quantia de fato, muito bem cumprirei seu pedido.

-Ace: "Sabo died following his dream, against everything, he went to the sea to fulfill his dream no matter how much we told him that we wanted him to wait for us" with more tears on his face and a more pronounced cry, his face of Jove contracted and her tears came out even more than before, Ace followed

I love the story. It is very unusual. I am looking for more chapters to come and for all this new theme to show itself fully. Thanks for your work!

chapters are too short, characters are so simple and easily controlled like an idots, the MC is good but maybe he's in the wrong novel.  he is way too good for that normal place