九龙法师 - Reviews

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It is a decently good novel but the system that gets the mc to act like a five year old at all times and if it weren’t for plot armor he would be dead in no time makes this novel not for me

I couldn't even start to read this to even rank it. too many additional characters makes it painful to try. clean it up please so that many people will be able to enjoy it if it is a good story

first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.

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Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.

awesome piece author, I must say I enjoyed the first two chapters I read?? Keep up the goo work

All she could feel was the familiar oppressive aura of death.

"You look, handsome sweetie, I would like you to meet Mr. and Ms. Granger together with their daughter Hermoine who came to visit. Say hi to them" Mom introduced the family to me.

Bumaba na ako ng bus. At inamoy ang simoy ng hangin. Bigla akong inubo dahil sa usok na nalanghap ko. Naalala ko nasa maynila na nga pala ako, wala na ako sa probinsya.

"it's not announced to the public because we must protect the princess as a normal person from now on. she will only have 2guards by her side until she comes back to retain her duties. unfortunately, the private information was exposed before we announced the decisions of the palace, which is a private offense"

Her face fell but she recovered soon.