Creating A New Legend Through Practical Magic in the Harry Potter World - Reviews

As you said in the end, this is your first book. Truly appreciating it....

We crossed the 100 chaps mark, so let's do some Q&A. Ask me anything.I MEANANYTHING.My life or what might happen with this book and what future stuff I might do. Also, I won't give spoilers for this book

A level system novel with modern setting that’s not for those who have strong feelings about animal protection. A random chance allows MC to be equipped with a system that helps him transform into a fish and consume other fishes to level up, evolve and promote his skills/ gain new skills. I couldn’t get over the fact that the first thing he does is experiment with his own pet fishes from his fish tank. It’s somehow so...insensitive. He can use skills to change normal fish into rare fish. Later, of course, he goes out to buy fishes to consume, and has adventures raising money and selling the rare fishes he transformed. He has a girlfriend (but also has encounters with several beauties).

Overall, a very good story. Sometimes there are grammar or spelling mistakes, but those are easy to look over. Pacing is just a touch too fast, and sometimes the story jumps around a bit making it a touch confusing but not too bad. I have very much enjoyed this story so far and  I am looking forward to this as it further develops. Only character I don't really like, is the yandere, they have no place in a harem. At least in my opinion.

ALRIGHT! I have read till the latest chapter and it blows my mind how the system of the game works. It feels like the game itself is interesting without the story and the plot. With how real the game is, I'm hooked by this story. Very nice job author! Please release more while I'm waiting for your other novels updates :)

I'd say go for it ... before deciding if it's worth your time ?.yes mc works for crown prince (who is a woman) but kingdom also supports mc.world background is not much explained ~ is it a martial arts world ~ is it a cultivation world (this seems more likely)~ what type of characters live in it. Humans and demons perhaps..writing quality & translation quality are quite good ??

Alas! Finally some excellent novel plus it's a MMORPG (which I like much other than kingdom-building novels)For meThe beginning of this novel was cliche with some elder stepsister and some things which are pretty commonBut the novel has things and the plot which hooks you up to expect the next chapter plus the story and has a good world backgroundOverall, it's good, and wish for the author to keep writing this novel

Simply impeccable. This is one of those novels that give you hope for the entire web novel medium. While this is not a new genre by far, the level of quality across the board makes this one of the most interesting and addictive works I've ever read. Not to be dramatic, but New Eden is one of those books that make you feel like you've been blessed from the gods of literacy themselves. If you don't check out this masterpiece, you might as well tear out your eyes because obviously you don't deserve them. ??u200d♂️

As a top fan of Eastern fantasy, I can tell that the book is a master piece without doubt. Am just looking forward to what Bai Yu has in store for us.

heh but if you want come at me i killed 600 and ive got stronger

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