Avatar-The Mandate of Heaven - Reviews

The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors. Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting. Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies. Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future? ??I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/  a bit Dean of dark king /  and a bit Edward elric?World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me.Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible. ✔️Added in my library

Lets hope, MC does not go on racism spree all over world.From the name alone it is interesting. First few chapters name are good. But more interesting it is, more worried I am. Chinese authors have  chinese superiority syndrome in them. Lets see how this one goes.

The author dropped the novel don't start it. Don't waste your time with this is a shame but this is how it works in quidian. They drop novels

i like the Book. what where are the next chapters? zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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"Master, Madam have told you to bring pink flowers for the baby within an hour." The little maid said blankly.

It didn't take him long before he was right above the Shrek Academy, he slowed down and slowly started to descend.

Maybe it was supposed to be like this from the very beginning.

-can now make three at once.

Sadly, my brain wasn't alert enough to process the entire thing properly, so I quickly stuffed that episode to the back of my head and then blinked a few times to cast away my grogginess. Feeling that my eyes were a bit itchy, I raised my arm and rubbed it on them.

james: a one night stand do you want?

Yeah, sorry about the spoiler.But I had to say it, I do not want you to think that the synopsis and the story do not fit together.I even changed the volume name.Thanks for the feedback and the comments.