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Wooooooaaahhh! I love the idea of this novel. It is indeed interesting and you guys will not disappoint by reading this novel. Good luck and God Bless author. ??

off to a great start. ? here is to it being released.

Great book but i don't like the wimp character i know you are trying to develop its character but for me it hinders the story from becoming more interesting after a few chaps with him i just skipped rest of his chapter it was that bad so please do something about that and please keep updating it regularly love this novel

Novel take on Kingdom building an a system. I really like. Wish we could see 1 or 2 chapters a day though. Waiting several days is just too much.

Is the story dead?

A bright smile crossed Natsume's face making him very eye catching, I blushed a little, I felt like my heart skipped a beat. After that, our sports teacher came, his name was Mr. Mick Jonnas, he was from America though and he is one hell of a teacher, he make us run five hundred metres in every sports class.

"Huh, this? Yeah, it has been like this since I put it on this morning. You know I suffer from chronic wardrobe malfunction, Poppy." I replied with a huff, slightly smiling as I fixed my necklace once more. It is true: every day, big or small, there is at least one problem with my outfit. A button falls off, a zipper breaks, I spill anything on my clothes, by now I got used to it, so I just turned it into a joke instead of making a big fuss about it everytime. It's not the end of the world, anyway.

"It's the Sixth Prince and Seventh Princess!" A palace maid excitedly says.

"Did he tell you why?

  Kami sudah memasuki sebuah supermarket yang luar biasa besar. Ya, kami. Dia juga ikut bersamaku. Tadinya ia sudah mengatakan padaku bahwa ia memang memiliki tujuan yang sama denganku. Masih berusaha tenang dan mulai mengelilingi supermarket itu. Kulihat dia sudah menenteng sebuah keranjang yang sudah berisikan banyak makanan. Tidak denganku, aku tidak membutuhkan keranjang karena aku hanya memerlukan beberapa makanan saja. Brukk! Keranjangnya terjatuh kelantai. Kulihat ia meringis kesakitan seraya meniup-niup lengan kirinya. Baru kuingat, aku melupakan itu, tadinya ketika di bis, aku tahu itu, mengenai lengan kirinya yang terluka. Melihatnya yang kesusahan mengangkat keranjang dengan tangan kanannya membuatku iba. Penuh pertimbangan aku melangkah menghampirinya. Tanpa berkata aku langsung mengangkat keranjangnya.

As I chanted, a portal that is shape is like a circle appeared in front of us. The moment they see my portal. I can see shocked expressions from them.

Ana shot him a glare and then smiled at them wearily. "Ugh...e-excuse us for a moment." She said grabbing his arm and dragging him away, putting enough distance between them. As she did that and glanced at them briefly, they looked back at her innocently. A little too  innocently.