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Although it is sad, she is now thankful that they hadn't been blessed by their child yet. She does not want any of her children to ever feel the pain she had felt.

Do you still write this story

"Whoah! Really? Is that even a work of a man? More like a beast did the killing!" Joshua reacted.

"Oops, my bad, she's yours.'

Disclaimer : This is an MTL of a CN WN that I tried to tidy up a little bit before posting it here. I did not dare to say that I edit it, because English is not my main language, and my grammar is very not good enough. So I'm sorry if I did not make it good enough to be more readable.

two words HIDDEN GEMWhen I first started this novel I thought it would be full of mediorcre writing with an above average story just like a lot of the novels I read on this app but boy was I wrong. The writing is amazing and I can clearly see the image in my mind the chapters are long and very entertainingI RECOMMEND TO ALL THANK YOU AUTHOR I HOPE YOU KEEP UPLOADING!

The story isn't bad. Free chapters are a mess filled with over explanation of the power levels. I don't remember where but there is one chapter are exclusively filled with them. Right after almost same info. I was thinking to drop it when it become for money. But stayed and it become more interesting it still has a lot of heroes thoughts where he explains something umpteenth time again but it become not so obvious. Sometimes I even skip these parts to actual action and storry development. Overall author still keep me invested and I'm interested in being what will happen. but he need to quit explaining things. Readers not inbicils and we can think ourselves sometimes. If it will keep same way I don't know how long I'll be staying with this novel. I'm on around 70th chapters.

This is a good one here. The story is captivating and can instill thoughts on the readers. It keeps the reader in flow and has a decent English used.  I love it!!!!!!