12 Seconds (#1 in Military series) - Reviews

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Updates and World building are 3* since it's new. The writing is good, not a lot of mistakes. The flow of the story is slow but its written well. Log Horizon type MC with a loli sidekick. A lot of redundancy, either because he's padding his chapters or the author likes to hold our hands as we read. To me, it's meh. It wasn't good and it isn't bad either. It was bland with a few eye twitches when the MC becomes too full of himself. I mean, if you know how to solve the problem,  then solve the f*cking problem instead of playing around and causing more problems. Anyways...Verdict: Pass/Dropped

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Great novel overall . The MC may be Naive and easygoing at early chapters but he has Strong Unbending Will to keep moving forward. Great waifus as wellThe story is a very dark and grim at early chapters betrayals,manipulations and stuff. Well this novel is full of suffering. But Good character development.SO ANYWAYS I STOPPED READING THIS NOVEL. WHY U ASK??with how things is going im sure one of the MC waifus will die or get stolen or NTR i guess??possibly so because this world is very cruel. And im the type of person who gets great anxiety just thinking about it my loved ones suffering. Every chapter gives me more anxiety so i stopped reading. ANYWAYS if you're the type of person like me stop reading this.ABANDON ALL HOPE YE WHO ENTER HERE!!

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I read the beginning and I really like the story so far. I also like the world building and its mystery! looking forward to reading more!

"Alright guys, we need to get back to work now," the man shook his head and carried the plates and leftover to the cleaning area of the canteen.

our hero's come forth to a village close to a castle they went in the castle to see if there were anybody in side to know if they had spare weapons for there adventure but instead they walked inside at a bad time the s are saw them trying to make a important plan to wage war of have peace but they asked hero said "are realy going to chose war insted of Peace this is not going to end well if you dont stop this" hero said the king replied in a angrily manner  "your not part of this pesant" so the question is which is he going to choose??? (to be continued )

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'What now?', Rin felt something clicked inside this guy's…. Hematin's head for some reason, 'Are we going to be buddy-buddy now?', he didn't know how to respond but since his opponent introduced himself, even if in a weird timing, he became obligated to do it too.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed